by knockout » Mon Sep 23, 2013 2:58 pm
Better than I anticipated. Your kar frags were pretty good, especially for a non-invite player at this stage in the game. Some things to think about if you decide to do another one:
The music was terrible. Even though it may be a song you really like, you have to remember that it's not entirely for you. You probably want to pick something a little easier to listen to, as well as something that can synch better with your frags. I remember when I put a Megadeth song in my movie I thought it was kind of walking the line, but I picked a radio-friendly song of theirs and I don't think anyone complained about it.
You kind of went overboard on the effects. It felt like every shot had some silly lighting effect to it that is kind of unnecessary. The shots are good enough on their own to just be enjoyed.
-Also, the wallhack effect was really ugly. Probably want to find a better one.
It felt kind of slow. I'm not entirely sure why, but it seemed like the overall speed of the footage was...slow. Maybe you added a little too much slow motion or something. Maybe some fast forwarding through grenade primes and stuff like that could help.
Better than I anticipated. Your kar frags were pretty good, especially for a non-invite player at this stage in the game. Some things to think about if you decide to do another one:
The music was terrible. Even though it may be a song you really like, you have to remember that it's not entirely for you. You probably want to pick something a little easier to listen to, as well as something that can synch better with your frags. I remember when I put a Megadeth song in my movie I thought it was kind of walking the line, but I picked a radio-friendly song of theirs and I don't think anyone complained about it.
You kind of went overboard on the effects. It felt like every shot had some silly lighting effect to it that is kind of unnecessary. The shots are good enough on their own to just be enjoyed.
-Also, the wallhack effect was really ugly. Probably want to find a better one.
It felt kind of slow. I'm not entirely sure why, but it seemed like the overall speed of the footage was...slow. Maybe you added a little too much slow motion or something. Maybe some fast forwarding through grenade primes and stuff like that could help.